A sweet memory visits me every now and then
It peckers on me with its dainty peak like a white fluffy hen
It rolls all around me and leaves marks like a pen
Then suddenly I find myself in a memories filled den
Nostalgic memories that make me feel like I am but ten
I marvel upon these memories as if they were across a ben
I look at where I am and compare to where I was then
I revel in the honey crusted feelings that place me on a fen
Between a smile and a tear, nostalgic memories play me like an atenteben
Between a cloven certain and hesitant yen,
Nostalgic memories drift back into their bitter-sweet lem
And loom back into the sky to decorate it like a wezen…
Spice
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October 6th, 2011 at 10:29 pm
alright i loved it. quite descriptive and the rhyming could follow till the very end! but if you want to make longer poems you should try alternating sounds after each line or a different sound altogether with each stanza…keep writing Spice
October 16th, 2011 at 11:36 pm
Thank you